Uploading-and-downloading-data.md

@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@ PEP provides built-in processing facilities for some data formats. See the secti
 
 # Downloading data
 
-Once data has been stored in PEP, it can be downloaded by [authorized](Access-control#data-access) users. This is commonly achieved by means of [the `pepcli pull` command](Using-pepcli#pull). In its most basic form, the command is invoked to download data for a specific participant (identifier) and column (name), e.g.:
+Data stored in PEP can be downloaded by [authorized](Access-control#data-access) users. This is commonly achieved by means of [the `pepcli pull` command](Using-pepcli#pull). In its most basic form, the command is invoked to download data for a specific participant (identifier) and column (name), e.g.:
 
 ```
 /app/pepcli pull -p POM162733743006 -c Holter.Visit1
 ```
 
-Data for multiple participants and/or columns can be downloaded in one fell swoop by specifying more of the corresponding switches. E.g.:
+Data for multiple participants and/or columns can be downloaded in one fell swoop by specifying corresponding switches multiple times. E.g.:
 
 ```
 /app/pepcli pull -p POM162733743006 -p POM390792184872 -p 834735705658 -c Holter.Visit1 -c Holter.Visit2 -c IsTestParticipant